高考結束了，我們邀請了4位上海四大名校（不知道四大名校，可以看這里腦補下，四大名校指上海中學、華師二附中、復旦附中、交大附中）的學霸給大家寫了四篇英語作文的范文。名校學霸真是不虛此名，小編覺得這作文水平都可以跟當年考研的水準相當了，膜拜下。應學生要求，我們沒有署名，不過據了解，這4位同學都已經拿到名校的了。想知道我們怎么邀請到的嗎？很簡單啦，四大名校的多位英語教師都是我們《全新英語閱讀》這套叢書的作者了，而這4位學霸又是我們作者的學生，所以近水樓臺啊。《全新英語閱讀》系列已上市，詳情可以拉到文尾點”閱讀原文“可了解詳情。

備注：看英語范文建議把手機橫屏看效果更好。

作文 | 2016上海高考英語作文真題

假設你是中華中學一名中學生，最近你正在參與一個研究性學習研究調查，調查課題為“關于父母是否對孩子感到驕傲”。

1.簡要描述這些數據

2.分析該原因

父母：對孩子感到驕傲

80%

孩子：認為父母對自己感到驕傲

60%

范文1

we have a the in our and to find out are of . It out that 80% of the take in , only 60% of the are of them. The that from the ’ , they are not that good to live up to ’ .

One may be that are with . They kids to be , to be and . Even if a goal, they will not give any to be away by the . , what hear is and from .

As for , we tend to our . This is the of our , to some . We are not used to our , , . So most do not kids or say " I’m of you" even when they do love and they have done a job.

As we can see, many to the . We to to and we hope a and can be . all, is a for love and love!

范文2

I'm Yao Ping from High . I’ve a on “ are of ”. As is in the , 80% of are of only 60% of the kids know they`re of, me food for .

What’s the ? From I am , it may from the of , in , tend to have more and less .

, have the : a man with a in hand, than , and the “ ” is a one of them. They that is no such as an kid from . Thus, feel more of of in ` but warm eyes.

In , lack of may be . Due to our , and kids love for each . , , no of good and kids, and kids are less to the of , is and them back.

To put in a , it is the of in that make the . in the and hard to as it , both , , step , and the , and show the and love for each .

范文3

A has been out on take in . the of our and , we got the , as is in the . 80% of the said that they did, 60% of the gave the same . It's a of , but than the of .

It is that most feel of . This the pure love of . No how or how one is, he is the ' and they will be on his side, him as a of life.

, many this to . But why do some can't ’ ?

The be the of love. True love from , and we can only feel it by . If is the of , the may miss the due to lack of and self–.

So may as well tell that they are of them, can ' .

范文4

are the two who keep us , us, take care of us and all they have to us we were born. our long path, ’s a on the and . I, , thus held a on my and . The turn out that 80% of are of only 60% of do so.

dose the go? From my , two to it. is . show ’s back for fear that they be too over- to well. When it to face-to-face , to out , the fact that more than .

On the hand, are also to for and less to . We work hard and are so to win and . When we don’t get what is , we are into , , , and lose the to calm down and . , we fail to find out how deep our love us and how they are we a lot.

The the gap. , as long as and make , can we the gap, each and a idea.

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